I am a Year 8 student at Glenbrae School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teachers are Mrs Tofa and Mrs Raj.
BANG!
Gunshots
fly everywhere
Like planes in the air
Land started to fade
as well as the chiefs
Who signed the paper from the british and the queen
Maori fights on to take back what's theirs
Woooww!! Gideon, this was super cool. The fact you said "Maori fights on to take back what's theirs" was very amazing. Keep up with the good work !!By Soane
Wow this is a really god poem Gideon. Keep up the great work.
Wow Gideon this poem is so good I liked how you used all these words and put it into a poem. Keep up the good work!
Hey Gideon,This poem is really fascinating. Even I couldn't keep up with your work. Also Good job:)- Maria
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Woooww!! Gideon, this was super cool. The fact you said "Maori fights on to take back what's theirs" was very amazing. Keep up with the good work !!
ReplyDeleteBy Soane
Wow this is a really god poem Gideon. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteWow Gideon this poem is so good I liked how you used all these words and put it into a poem. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Gideon,
ReplyDeleteThis poem is really fascinating. Even I couldn't keep up with your work. Also Good job:)
- Maria